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Saturday, December 27, 2014

One Year Anniversary

It's officially been an entire year since I first came up with the idea for my story! 
So much has changed, but I'm so pleased with the progress it has made:)
Thanks to Nanowrimo, only a few chapters remain now before I am ready to start the real work.
Revision.
There is a pretty funny pin I found that I think will perfectly illustrate how I feel about the first draft.

Haha writing through the first time you feel all-powerful and amazing, and the editing the first draft you are just sifting through and deleting all kinds of junk!
Maybe by next Christmas I will have it polished and published-- 
How that's for a New Year's Resolution?


In honor of the one-year anniversary, I remember the first time I thought of the story. I was out snowshoeing with my little sister Kelly like we do--and since we were gone for a quite a while, I started making up a story to entertain us. As per our Daddy's tradition, it started with two sisters.
Kelly in our Mama's Norwegian Sweater

We reach the meadow!

I have a Norwegian sweater too!!










Tuesday, November 18, 2014

Nanowrimo: November is the longest month


Me at the end of this month.

I love November. It's getting cold and chilly, which gives me an excuse to wear coats and hats and scarves and boots and mittens-- LOVE it! And the snow hasn't stuck yet so I can still go running outside--it really is perfection.
This month however, for the first time, I am participating in Nanowrimo. Sound intimidating? It is.
It's short for National Novel Writing Month, and is essentially a challenge to writers everywhere to write 50,000 words in one month.
At first, it was easy. I breezed through, I got ahead of my word count, even! If you were to keep up with the program's plan, you just had to write a little under 1700 words a day which, for you page counters, is something like 3 pages double spaced. I think. Anyway ya, it was easy, I was having a blast, and I wrote a crap-ton of words, one day even getting up to 4,000 words, no problem! I got super excited, and I texted all my friends like, "Yo homies, my first draft is going to be done BY THE END OF NOVEMBER!" You know, rather than by Christmas or my Birthday in February as I had anticipated.
Well to old me, (Jessica of a week ago past) I say this. Don't count your chickens before they hatch. It's been just a week, but I finally started to need those annoying pep talks the Nano organizers were sending out. They have this weird obsession with coffee and cats on there, which I didn't understand until sometime around midnight last night after taking one of several awful midterms...and now I hang on to their every encouraging word. Sad.
So moral of the story, I learned writing is hard. Aaaand it's not at the same time. But mostly it is. You need time, focus, and discipline, which are all somewhat rare commodities in my life. But when you get going good, it can be really really fun.
Me hidden away in the library as I write. Good times.

I've learned again that nothing comes out exactly right the first time I spew it onto the computer, and if I am going to write well, I have to have the story going on in my head like a movie while I write at the same time. Well, if I don't sit in complete silence with no friends and no internet and get the movie going, then nothing happens. Therein lies the trouble.
It will be nice to get to Thanksgiving break, and sit down with some time to myself to unwind, and let my story start becoming the only thing on my mind again. It will be nice not to have appointments to meet and other priorities and overall, just a chance to catch up on word count.
I love Nanowrimo. By the end I will have written in one month as much as I had written in the entire year previously so, ya, I guess you could say it's a big deal! I will be stoked to have everything just out and down on my screen, ready for revision. Then I can get to the real work, of honing and refining the work of art that I hope and intend for it to be.
Until then, I will be here, word-barfing garbage out onto paper by the bucket-load, hiding away in my apartment growing fat and pale until the end of November when I will emerge at last... victorious. If you need me...text me, I may answer. In a week or two.
Thanks for reading!


Friday, October 10, 2014

Excerpt: Villains of Legend

Norse mythology created some of the most interesting villains in classic literature--one of the most famous of whom is Loki. Throughout the various legends he is referred to as "the trickster" for although he causes the Gods a lot of grief, he is not altogether bad. Indeed, many of the Gods' greatest treasures came to them because Loki was fixing some trouble he had caused. Loki is especially dangerous because of this good side, because you may let your guard down long enough for him to get close to you. In my novel, the different characters are reincarnated versions of the old Gods, and Loki, of course, will have his place among them. Below is an excerpt from a chapter introducing Luka, heir to the throne of Folkváng, a country bordering on Asgard.


Folkváng’s Heir
“Attending such ceremonies encourages love and loyalty from one’s subjects…”
            What a droll, un-utterably boring man, Luka thought as he stared at the emissary in front of him. The man was tall, and thin, and wore the rich brown tunic associated with the lower houses of Folkváng nobility. Thin grey hair strung from his head and his voice droned on as interesting as a slab of rock. No one here has any imagination. I am alone in the world, he mourned inwardly.
            “And reminds the King of his duties towards his people…”
            Visibly his shoulders heaved with a sigh. It was almost physically painful how long Lord Caldwell could talk about nothing.
            What am I doing here?  he thought, not for the first time, as his eyes bored holes into his tutor. He, Luka, would be King of Folkváng one day, whether or not he listened to these droll lessons.
            With that he stood up from the heavy carved oak chair and strode towards the door.
            “But, but your majesty,” Lord Caldwell called after his retreating back, “We’re not finished yet,”
            “Oh,” Luka turned just inside the doorway, placing one hand on the frame, “But we are,” and giving the man a crooked smile, he shut the door firmly behind him.
Striding down a long hallway lined with grey marble he seethed a little. What would Lord Caldwell do if his hair turned purple in the night? he mused. Or found scorpions in his socks? A vague smile lit his features. The man might finally do something interesting for once in his life.
            His uncle would be upset with him for walking out of that lesson, yes. But he simply couldn’t bear another minute of listening to that old toad. He learned far more interesting things reading in Folkváng’s vast library—about the lores and ancient legends. And about magic. The ancient rulers of Midtenheim had real power, that didn’t bend beneath the whim of their people.
 Besides, what did Luka care if he upset his uncle? The old fool was only regent for another year and a half, until Luka turned 18 and could rule on his own.  His uncle didn’t really care for him anyhow, and would be more than happy to replace him in a second.
            Just then, a plain-looking maid in a white smock passed him in the hall, keeping her head down, and giving him a small curtsy.
            “Elsa, right?” he stopped, gathering himself quickly. Luka considered himself decently handsome, he had dark hair and a lean build—so he flashed her one of his most charming smiles. “How is that rash of yours doing?”
            The maid in exchange gave him a terrified glance, “My Lord?”
            Boring. Everyone in this whole Palace. Were they all brainwashed as infants to be totally and utterly stupid?
It looks quite painful,” he noted, pointing to her sleeve where angry red skin peeked beyond the cusp. “Have you been feeling just awful?”
“I…it…” She stuttered, “It’s feeling much better now, m’ Lord.”
“Well.” He nodded, “I hope whoever was responsible for that horrible trick is apprehended soon.”
“Yes, my Lord,” she breathed, looking towards the ground. He waved her away with a dry grunt, and she scurried on gladly into the nearest room, glancing back at him over her shoulder.
What would I give for a little excitement around here, Luka sighed. His eyes searched the surrounding grey pillars for inspiration.
           
There were only so many interesting pranks one could come up with to keep oneself amused— dusting the servant’s beds with itching powder just didn’t seem to be enough anymore.
Perhaps it was time for his cousin’s favorite lady-in-waiting, the one Luka had seen him gazing at like some stupid calf, to be caught getting into a little trouble.  He stepped father into the shadow of the wall and began to feel the familiar tingle in his skin.
Just then, ahead of him a dark cloak whisked around the corner into an open stairwell. He stared after it, a lump of anger rising back to the base of his throat.
There it was again—his shadow.  Luka’s boredom had increased dramatically a year or so ago after this man, whoever he was, had begun following him around the palace, and everywhere he went. Because of the nature of Luka’s powers, he could not be seen doing them, or risk being compromised in future tricks. And the man was good—so good at hiding that Luka had not yet been able to catch a glimpse of his face.
“Curse you, uncle,” He hissed under his breath. Whoever the man was, there was no doubt in Luka’s mind he had been sent by King Steven.
The old man was afraid of Luka, he was sure of that. Though Luka had never been caught at his pranks, and the King’s own children seemed to have been caught red-handed at more than their share. Of course they would always deny their involvement afterward, and the King somehow still regarded him with suspicion.
It was about a year ago that Luka had overheard something interesting from the servants, who exchanged the rumor in whispers just outside the palace stables. 
“The king,” they whispered, “can he really allow that boy to take the throne?”
At the mention of the word “king” he had drawn closer, pressing himself to the rough wooden planks of the barn. He allowed his skin to tingle and morph—taking on the color of the surrounding wood.
“I don’t care if he’s the rightful heir, the boy is a monster. You should see what sort of things he has done to those frogs and snakes he catches. Absolutely mutilated.”
Indeed, it was him they were talking about. Luka’s eyes squinted, trying to pick out which servant was ratting on him.
“It’s a shame really, his parents were the kindest people—rest their souls. And he had an older brother once, didn’t he?”
Luka felt himself quiver and his skin turned a slightly more reddish brown. There was that older brother of his again.
“Such a shame he’s gone,” they murmured.
At this point the male speaker lowered his voice. “I’ll wager he’s behind the tricks being done around the palace. Since he could walk there have been some mighty strange things happening. I tell you that boy has something about him…”
Luka’s breathing grew heavier. How could they possibly know it was him? Well they can’t prove anything, he thought.
“Perhaps,” a woman’s voice chimed in, “The king’s son Harvik could be proclaimed as heir? He’s as fine a boy as there ever was, big as a bear already— and kind! As I see it, the king would do well for Folkváng if he would let that boy rule instead—“
He had heard enough. Luka’s mind roiled with what he had just heard, and couldn’t resist taking a quick peek around the corner to see who spoke.
It was a manservant that Luka recognized as one who waited on the sons of the King. The other was a maid he didn’t know, but guessed that she worked in the kitchens.
A peculiar rage came over him, and that very night, his cousin Harvik's room had caught fire.
 The boy’s life had barely been saved. The manservant and maid on the other hand were found with the firepower in their rooms, and the king had been forced to punish them. As for the talk about Harvik ascending the throne, well, that died down greatly, after Harvik lost much of his sight in the fire.
“Worse things have happened to people than going blind,” Luka muttered, thinking back. His cousin hadn’t died after all. And now Folkváng was certain to have their rightful King—one that would lead the people with intelligence rather than with muscle or weak emotion. It really was for the best.
If only the same thing could be done for all the mourning over his lost brother. A dead brother would always be idolized. Criticism was something left for the survivors.



Sunday, September 28, 2014

An Introduction to: Ragnarok

Ragnarok
Fimbulwinter, Age of Axes, Age of Wolves



What's your book about?

Ragnarok (... a series?) is about two Norwegian-American sisters, Janna and Klara,  who stumble into Midtenheim, the world of old Norse mythology. They soon find out their coming is the beginning of a prophecy that fortells the end of Midtenheim-- an event also known as Ragnarok. Despite the might of kings, princes, monsters and natural disasters, they become caught up in a quest to save the world. 


Of course, they are aided by various friends they meet along the way, including but not limited to, a blacksmith, a prince, a dwarf, an old man, an ice giant and a farmer. All the while, a terrifying enemy awaits beyond the wall in the dark land of Niflheim, hungry for revenge on his ancient enemies. 

Janna and Klara must assemble the world's heroes, and revive an ancient magic, so that humanity may have a chance in the final battle for the world. 


Readers will become acquainted with gods, ice giants, kings, blacksmiths, berserkers, dwarves, trolls, bears, ravens, valkyrie, wolves, and the mythology associated with them.


What makes your book unique?

It's based very very closely on old Norse Mythology. I wanted the book to be in an epic, solemn tone, as if you were sitting around the fire with the ancient elders hearing them talk about the Gods and their exploits. But then, my heart knew some modern girls had to be a part of it, to see what would happen, and how they would be involved. They had their own snarky tone they added to the mix. I always wanted a book like this, and so I knew I had to write it.

Who would be interested in reading this book?

Young adult girls between the ages of 14 and 18 with a taste for the fantastic. 

What are similar reads?

 The Chronicles of Narnia, by CS Lewis,  East by Edith Pattou, Ice Fall by Matthew J Kirby, and The Belgariad series by David Eddings have the same scandinavian feel and adventure style. Books my readers may also enjoy are Divergent by Veronica Roth, I am Number Four by Pittacus Lore, The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins, and Ella Enchanted by Gail Carson Levine. 


Making Progress on My Book, Y'all!!

So I'll be real with you, there's not a lot of time to write.
I had to drop an amazing opera workshop I was in
Because I wanted so badly to have time to write.
Maybe you think you don't like opera, so you don't relate to that pain,
And that's ok...but you're wrong and I hate you. 
JUST KIDDING
But opera is bomb.com,
if you are ever in Vienna you MUST go,
or just go home cause you're vacationing wrong.

Anyway, so sad day. Toodles, Mozart my love.
On to more gruff, Norsk things:)

My sacrifice has been rewarded, and the writing Gods have been good to me.
I contacted a couple of friends I knew were also writing books,
and asked if they wanted to be in a writing group,
where we would read and critique each other's work every two weeks or so.
And they agreed!:)
We've been working hard--having fresh pairs of eyes to read over new material like that--
it's priceless!!
Still my most treasured reader however is my 17 year old sister,
Because without shame, she is my exact target audience.
Silly, smart, easily excited by the mention of a handsome boy...
Her input I always hold at the highest value.
Sarah and I at my graduation from BYU this August

I told my writing group to think of my book as an advanced "Princess Novel"
(My sisters and I's code-name for cheesy adolescent versions of old fairy-tales that we secretly love)
so that they wouldn't be expecting something too serious,
and so, neither should you.
THOUGH STILL, a book with a plot that revolves around romance (Twilight) makes me gag.

Seriously, the book mine is most like is the Chronicles of Narnia, probably.
Norse style.
Therefore, I tried to make it have an excellent plot, lots of mythology, 
still geared toward young adults
with romance sprinkled in only as a bonus...

OK OK, 
why don't I just give you a proper introduction
to the entire book in my next post, deal?
Deal.

Midtenheim, setting of my novel.

So ya, I feel like I've been making some sweet progress.
One of my favorite villains, Luka, is just reeeeally coming together. 
I learned about his childhood in one of my last interviews I held with him in my mind,
(A fun activity for when Church gets long) 
as well as his motives, and man.
I find him interesting, and complicated! And yet still despicable.
Like if I was into bad boys with tortured souls, I would date him. 
Ok, maybe not.
But anyway, my favorite villains are always the ones where you realize,
"Dear me. They have a point! Maybe they are right and not the hero??" 
So I tried to do that with him.
After I make a blog post with an introduction to the book,
I will definitely give an excerpt from him.
Luka

Last thing I have to say, is that unfortunately, if I am going to connect with you, my audience,
I have to become affluent in Social Media realms, 
which, prior to writing this book, I happily avoided as much as possible.
But if it means I will get to know you, and you me, 
Then I will do what I must!
Look soon for a new link to my clean, gorgeous author website, 
where you can subscribe for more updates about my writing,
and see some cool pictures of me sitting in a chair
looking really intelligent.

XOXO

Frazy-Bear



Sunday, May 25, 2014

Museum of Musical Instruments

First on the Museum docket we have the Museum of Ancient Musical instruments
where we saw the ancestors to our beloved cello & viola!!
As well as the harp, but let's be real,
it hasn't changed that much.
Mom wants all of those instruments, I just know it.


The entrance had tons of amazing armor. The men then were so little, the armor would only have fit Kelly!



A long slender Celtic harp


A Viola de Gamba!! The ancestor of my beloved Viola:)





Love the designs on this bass! I really would love a tat like that on my viola:)


Kelly worshipping at the Temple of Aphrodite

Haha! Seductive little Kelly!

Dead at the Altar. What a shame.

Grecian Goddess Herself

Jessica tries a fountain pose

The worshipping gets intense!

And Kelly gives it a go:) What am I teaching my baby sister??

We start to get creative:)

The beautiful Kunsthistoriches Museum, I loved this place!!

Ceiling of the Kunsthistoriche

Our favorite statue!! Cupid and Psyche

So romantic:)

We could not believe the incredible detail in this painting. The gravel looks real!!

What really takes up most of our time.

Forgot where this was--but I love it and I want a crystal chandelier in my house someday.